The Jim Krusoe Litany in my Head

It seems right to open this highly erratic blog on writing and literary events with a bow to Jim Krusoe: novelist, sensei, friend.

The fabulous Mary Otis and I dedicated our November 2009 UCLA Hammer Museum reading to Jim–as our collections were forged in his Santa Monica College fiction workshop–and I recited the Jim Krusoe litany that plays in my head as I work. Here it is, in part.

  • When you’re writing a scene, give one character a task to complete. It gives the scene something to build toward.
  • Let the task go wrong.
  • Write the scene before the scene that changed your character’s life.
  • If a scene with two characters isn’t working, bring in a third.
  • Beware of designer names in search of a character.
  • People love reading about characters at work.
  • Look for enabling details–the one or two quirky or slightly off things about a person or setting that are so telling, the reader can imagine everything else, all at once.

And may I celebrate the most recent book to grow out of Jim’s workshop: BUMMER, by Janice Shapiro, a story collection just acquired by Soft Skull Press.

4 Responses to “The Jim Krusoe Litany in my Head”

  1. Jim Says:

    Thanks for sharing this, Dylan. These are great!

  2. dylan Says:

    (Not the Jim of the litany, though a wonderful, literary Jim.)

  3. carol Says:

    This is useful stuff. Not philosophy; just fixes.

  4. Maxine Says:

    Hi Dylan, Really like these pages. Great conversation about writing, minus the coffee.